編者按：在申請留學(xué)及簽證的過程中，經(jīng)常會(huì)被要求寫學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書（study plan）,本文作者長期從事留學(xué)文書寫作，因此結(jié)合自己的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，介紹...
在申請留學(xué)及簽證的過程中，經(jīng)常會(huì)被要求寫學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書（study plan）,本文作者長期從事留學(xué)文書寫作，因此結(jié)合自己的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，介紹一下學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的寫作。
一般來說學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以按照提交目的分成兩類，給大使館申請簽證用的，或是給學(xué)校申請錄取用的。用來申請學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃從本質(zhì)上講和個(gè)人陳述是同一類型的文書，關(guān)于學(xué)校申請類的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以參考個(gè)人陳述方面的文章，本文主要介紹提交大使館簽證用的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書。
歐美國家，特別是移民國家，如澳大利亞，新西蘭，加拿大等國針對留學(xué)生簽證的時(shí)候往往要求提供學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書，通過學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書使簽證官了解您的背景，選擇留學(xué)專業(yè)的動(dòng)機(jī)條件，選擇該國留學(xué)的理由，和清晰的未來留學(xué)時(shí)間安排，職業(yè)目標(biāo)和回國理由，配合審核您的其它材料決定是否給您發(fā)放留學(xué)簽證，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書是一份很關(guān)鍵的文件。
總的來說，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書需要包括以下幾方面內(nèi)容。
1、 簡單說明自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，專業(yè)背景及工作經(jīng)歷；
2、 說明自己進(jìn)一步求學(xué)的動(dòng)機(jī)及為什么選擇該國、該大學(xué)與該專業(yè)；
3、 詳細(xì)的留學(xué)時(shí)間安排；
4、介紹留學(xué)所需資金及來源；
5、 對未來職業(yè)目標(biāo)的闡述，留學(xué)后回國的理由。
學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的行文風(fēng)格和文章結(jié)構(gòu)與個(gè)人陳述有很大不同，不需要太多個(gè)性化和感性的描述，而應(yīng)該是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰簡單，邏輯嚴(yán)密，闡述的事實(shí)明確，相關(guān)論據(jù)有力可信，學(xué)成回國的理由要非常充分，并且絕對不能和申請人的其他材料發(fā)生矛盾。
由于使館的工作人員每天要處理大量的文件，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書切不可寫的太長，一般不應(yīng)超過800字，并且說明一個(gè)問題最好只用一個(gè)段落，段落前加上標(biāo)題，如 My Choice of University of Toronto in Canada ,My career objective 等，以便使館的工作人員對您一段內(nèi)容的中心思想一目了然。您的闡述應(yīng)該非常清晰易讀，不能希望讓使館的工作人員從您的文字中“挖掘”您“潛在”內(nèi)容。
學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的重點(diǎn)部分是未來的職業(yè)計(jì)劃和留學(xué)后回國的理由，通過這一部分來告訴大使館您到該國留學(xué)后，確實(shí)能夠?qū)δ穆殬I(yè)發(fā)展有良好的幫助，并且有可信有力的理由學(xué)成歸國。雖然要求學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的國家往往是移民國家，但是由于您申請簽證的理由是留學(xué)，因此通過學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書一定要消除您任何移民傾向?；貒碛梢Y(jié)合您個(gè)人的背景經(jīng)歷和家庭情況給出很合理的解釋，如一位擁有多年商業(yè)經(jīng)歷的經(jīng)理獲得去新西蘭讀商業(yè)管理碩士課程的機(jī)會(huì)，那么闡明他的職業(yè)目標(biāo)是回到中國成為一名跨國公司的高級經(jīng)理人，而他在中國多年積累的客戶資源和社交圈是一筆非常寶貴的財(cái)富，這就是非常強(qiáng)硬并合理的一條回國理由。特別需要注意的是，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書中關(guān)于回國理由等涉及事實(shí)論據(jù)的地方，不能任意編造。
最后需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是，由于學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書在英語表達(dá)上要求非常有條理，邏輯嚴(yán)密，簡潔有力，這是大多數(shù)中國申請人所難以達(dá)到的，由于語法錯(cuò)誤和邏輯關(guān)系的失誤往往會(huì)導(dǎo)致理解的偏差。因此請專門的機(jī)構(gòu)由外籍專家進(jìn)行語言上的修改是避免上述弊端的好辦法。
關(guān)于留學(xué)文件的寫作，可以登陸www.winnerps.com網(wǎng)站獲得幫助。
附：學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書樣文
Introduction of my background :
My training was in the area of Chinese Education in XXX University for Nationalities. The education I received there trained my basic abilities of learning and made me capable of independent working. Because of my interest,and curiosity in the new field of Marketing,I participated in the business directly related with market after my graduation from university.
My first job was Manager Assistant in XXX Supermarket. I learned a lot of experience from manager and co-workers, which added to my talent and efforts made me very successful in daily work. For example, I made our supermarket the "Supermarket without fake commodities" and instituted rigid regulations for supplier selection. Moreover, I bought large amount of goods with cash and quickly sold them at low price, which accelerated the turnover of money and increased our bargain power to suppliers. In 1996, I was promoted to be the Operation Executive. I audaciously built up three chain supermarkets in Shenzhen and established strong competitive advantages among our industry.
In 1998,I joined the Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co.Ltd.-whose main business is the sales of single chip and relevant software. I suggested the company enter the market of single chip's emluator which contained more technology and had more profit vacuum. I also enhanced the technology development and after-sales service; held technology lectures focused on potential clients and published technical introductory articles. Within only 2 years our emluator business became a well-known brand in our industry and became our company's core business and main resource of profit.
Why choose to study in New Zealand
Throughout my past experience, however, I realized that I need more than my talent and successful records to achieve my higher goals, especially as China joined the WTO and plays an active role in the global economy. An advanced education in marketing in a western country is necessary for me to have an international perspective of marketing and gain valuable knowledge of marketing theories and practices. The advanced Education system in New Zealand can provide high quality graduated program for me , the reasonable tuition and high standard living condition also attracted me deeply . The University of Waikato is one of eight University which authorized by the government of China , all these are reasons for me to determine to go to New Zealand, a country which has the highly developed business system and first-class education quality, for my further education.
Study plan :
I plan to study for the Mater Degree of Marketing in the University of xxx which last for two years. Because I believe my condition and qualification are suitable for the courses requirements. Matriculated in The University of XXX smoothly has proved the university also believes in my ability of completing my study without difficulties. Moreover, all of my accomplishments in the field of marketing within 10 year would be my good preparation for my further study. I am very confident that my experience would help me succeed in my post-graduate study. To study marketing needs solid English foundation. Although I have been keeping learning English these years and already have a very good English foundation, I still reckon that my English will be improved if I pay much attention to learn it in an English speaking country. Therefore, I prepare to complete half a year's English courses before my study of master courses and take IELTS in New Zealand as well.
When I received my master degree, I will get systematic Marketing knowledge and understanding of the running of business in New Zealand, a developed Western country .
My 10 year's saving which is *****RMB in *******Bank, my real estate which worth ****RMB (estimated my ******Bank) and my stock which worth ******* RMB (calculated in present market price) in stock market would be my firm foundation of studying in New Zealand. The study fee in ***university is ****** and the living cost is *****. Therefore, my financial status is sufficient to afford my study and living cost in New Zealand.
Career objective
As soon as I finish my master degree in Marketing, I'd like to return back to China directly. First, it simply because I love my motherland very much and I believe my further education in New Zealand could help me to make greater contributions to the people and economy that I have a passion for.
The second reason is I feel lucky that I live in an era when China is undergoing rapid economic and political reforms. I witnessed with my own eyes its transition from a society of monotony and low productivity to one that is much more open, prosperous, and full of momentum for growth. As a result this transition has created plenty of opportunities in Chinese economy.
Since I have always dreamed of being a successful international marketer in China, I would like to utilize the knowledge that I will acquire in New Zealand and abundant experience accumulated in China's domestic market to extend my own career as an international marketer who concerns the marketing in global scale.
More than ten year's domestic experience is extremely valuable for a successful marketer. However, in New Zealand-a country which has a totally different language and culture, there is few advantage for me, so coming back to China after learning is my best choice.
Finally, nearly all of my public relationship is based in China. During my ten year's work, I have already accumulated plenty of clients and relationship; those are very important foundation not only for my career but also for my daily life. I would never give them up. Furthermore my former company-Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co., Ltd. agreed with my decision of studying in New Zealand and they will keep my position and welfare while I am in New Zealand and look forward to my return. I would never like to miss this opportunity.
一般來說學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以按照提交目的分成兩類，給大使館申請簽證用的，或是給學(xué)校申請錄取用的。用來申請學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃從本質(zhì)上講和個(gè)人陳述是同一類型的文書，關(guān)于學(xué)校申請類的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以參考個(gè)人陳述方面的文章，本文主要介紹提交大使館簽證用的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書。
歐美國家，特別是移民國家，如澳大利亞，新西蘭，加拿大等國針對留學(xué)生簽證的時(shí)候往往要求提供學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書，通過學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書使簽證官了解您的背景，選擇留學(xué)專業(yè)的動(dòng)機(jī)條件，選擇該國留學(xué)的理由，和清晰的未來留學(xué)時(shí)間安排，職業(yè)目標(biāo)和回國理由，配合審核您的其它材料決定是否給您發(fā)放留學(xué)簽證，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書是一份很關(guān)鍵的文件。
總的來說，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書需要包括以下幾方面內(nèi)容。
1、 簡單說明自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，專業(yè)背景及工作經(jīng)歷；
2、 說明自己進(jìn)一步求學(xué)的動(dòng)機(jī)及為什么選擇該國、該大學(xué)與該專業(yè)；
3、 詳細(xì)的留學(xué)時(shí)間安排；
4、介紹留學(xué)所需資金及來源；
5、 對未來職業(yè)目標(biāo)的闡述，留學(xué)后回國的理由。
學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的行文風(fēng)格和文章結(jié)構(gòu)與個(gè)人陳述有很大不同，不需要太多個(gè)性化和感性的描述，而應(yīng)該是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰簡單，邏輯嚴(yán)密，闡述的事實(shí)明確，相關(guān)論據(jù)有力可信，學(xué)成回國的理由要非常充分，并且絕對不能和申請人的其他材料發(fā)生矛盾。
由于使館的工作人員每天要處理大量的文件，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書切不可寫的太長，一般不應(yīng)超過800字，并且說明一個(gè)問題最好只用一個(gè)段落，段落前加上標(biāo)題，如 My Choice of University of Toronto in Canada ,My career objective 等，以便使館的工作人員對您一段內(nèi)容的中心思想一目了然。您的闡述應(yīng)該非常清晰易讀，不能希望讓使館的工作人員從您的文字中“挖掘”您“潛在”內(nèi)容。
學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的重點(diǎn)部分是未來的職業(yè)計(jì)劃和留學(xué)后回國的理由，通過這一部分來告訴大使館您到該國留學(xué)后，確實(shí)能夠?qū)δ穆殬I(yè)發(fā)展有良好的幫助，并且有可信有力的理由學(xué)成歸國。雖然要求學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的國家往往是移民國家，但是由于您申請簽證的理由是留學(xué)，因此通過學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書一定要消除您任何移民傾向?；貒碛梢Y(jié)合您個(gè)人的背景經(jīng)歷和家庭情況給出很合理的解釋，如一位擁有多年商業(yè)經(jīng)歷的經(jīng)理獲得去新西蘭讀商業(yè)管理碩士課程的機(jī)會(huì)，那么闡明他的職業(yè)目標(biāo)是回到中國成為一名跨國公司的高級經(jīng)理人，而他在中國多年積累的客戶資源和社交圈是一筆非常寶貴的財(cái)富，這就是非常強(qiáng)硬并合理的一條回國理由。特別需要注意的是，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書中關(guān)于回國理由等涉及事實(shí)論據(jù)的地方，不能任意編造。
最后需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是，由于學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書在英語表達(dá)上要求非常有條理，邏輯嚴(yán)密，簡潔有力，這是大多數(shù)中國申請人所難以達(dá)到的，由于語法錯(cuò)誤和邏輯關(guān)系的失誤往往會(huì)導(dǎo)致理解的偏差。因此請專門的機(jī)構(gòu)由外籍專家進(jìn)行語言上的修改是避免上述弊端的好辦法。
關(guān)于留學(xué)文件的寫作，可以登陸www.winnerps.com網(wǎng)站獲得幫助。
附：學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書樣文
Introduction of my background :
My training was in the area of Chinese Education in XXX University for Nationalities. The education I received there trained my basic abilities of learning and made me capable of independent working. Because of my interest,and curiosity in the new field of Marketing,I participated in the business directly related with market after my graduation from university.
My first job was Manager Assistant in XXX Supermarket. I learned a lot of experience from manager and co-workers, which added to my talent and efforts made me very successful in daily work. For example, I made our supermarket the "Supermarket without fake commodities" and instituted rigid regulations for supplier selection. Moreover, I bought large amount of goods with cash and quickly sold them at low price, which accelerated the turnover of money and increased our bargain power to suppliers. In 1996, I was promoted to be the Operation Executive. I audaciously built up three chain supermarkets in Shenzhen and established strong competitive advantages among our industry.
In 1998,I joined the Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co.Ltd.-whose main business is the sales of single chip and relevant software. I suggested the company enter the market of single chip's emluator which contained more technology and had more profit vacuum. I also enhanced the technology development and after-sales service; held technology lectures focused on potential clients and published technical introductory articles. Within only 2 years our emluator business became a well-known brand in our industry and became our company's core business and main resource of profit.
Why choose to study in New Zealand
Throughout my past experience, however, I realized that I need more than my talent and successful records to achieve my higher goals, especially as China joined the WTO and plays an active role in the global economy. An advanced education in marketing in a western country is necessary for me to have an international perspective of marketing and gain valuable knowledge of marketing theories and practices. The advanced Education system in New Zealand can provide high quality graduated program for me , the reasonable tuition and high standard living condition also attracted me deeply . The University of Waikato is one of eight University which authorized by the government of China , all these are reasons for me to determine to go to New Zealand, a country which has the highly developed business system and first-class education quality, for my further education.
Study plan :
I plan to study for the Mater Degree of Marketing in the University of xxx which last for two years. Because I believe my condition and qualification are suitable for the courses requirements. Matriculated in The University of XXX smoothly has proved the university also believes in my ability of completing my study without difficulties. Moreover, all of my accomplishments in the field of marketing within 10 year would be my good preparation for my further study. I am very confident that my experience would help me succeed in my post-graduate study. To study marketing needs solid English foundation. Although I have been keeping learning English these years and already have a very good English foundation, I still reckon that my English will be improved if I pay much attention to learn it in an English speaking country. Therefore, I prepare to complete half a year's English courses before my study of master courses and take IELTS in New Zealand as well.
When I received my master degree, I will get systematic Marketing knowledge and understanding of the running of business in New Zealand, a developed Western country .
My 10 year's saving which is *****RMB in *******Bank, my real estate which worth ****RMB (estimated my ******Bank) and my stock which worth ******* RMB (calculated in present market price) in stock market would be my firm foundation of studying in New Zealand. The study fee in ***university is ****** and the living cost is *****. Therefore, my financial status is sufficient to afford my study and living cost in New Zealand.
Career objective
As soon as I finish my master degree in Marketing, I'd like to return back to China directly. First, it simply because I love my motherland very much and I believe my further education in New Zealand could help me to make greater contributions to the people and economy that I have a passion for.
The second reason is I feel lucky that I live in an era when China is undergoing rapid economic and political reforms. I witnessed with my own eyes its transition from a society of monotony and low productivity to one that is much more open, prosperous, and full of momentum for growth. As a result this transition has created plenty of opportunities in Chinese economy.
Since I have always dreamed of being a successful international marketer in China, I would like to utilize the knowledge that I will acquire in New Zealand and abundant experience accumulated in China's domestic market to extend my own career as an international marketer who concerns the marketing in global scale.
More than ten year's domestic experience is extremely valuable for a successful marketer. However, in New Zealand-a country which has a totally different language and culture, there is few advantage for me, so coming back to China after learning is my best choice.
Finally, nearly all of my public relationship is based in China. During my ten year's work, I have already accumulated plenty of clients and relationship; those are very important foundation not only for my career but also for my daily life. I would never give them up. Furthermore my former company-Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co., Ltd. agreed with my decision of studying in New Zealand and they will keep my position and welfare while I am in New Zealand and look forward to my return. I would never like to miss this opportunity.