本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《研習(xí)范文》。
龔朝暉簡(jiǎn)介：
武漢新航道學(xué)校雅思寫作講師，上外高級(jí)口譯，廈門大學(xué)口譯，英語專業(yè)碩士。多次在大型活動(dòng)中擔(dān)任口譯。曾獲得全國(guó)英語辯論賽三等獎(jiǎng)、湖北省口譯大賽一等獎(jiǎng)。有多年英語教學(xué)和培訓(xùn)經(jīng)歷，經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富。一路走來，驀然回首，發(fā)現(xiàn)還是鐘情于那傳播希望的綠色講臺(tái)和學(xué)生收獲后如花的笑靨。
眾所周知，雅思寫作往往是廣大雅思考生感到最頭疼的一個(gè)部分，也是得分最低的一項(xiàng)。以2008年為例，根據(jù)雅思官方的資料，08年中國(guó)大陸雅思考生平均成績(jī)5.46分，其中寫作最低，僅5.12分。
造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因是多方面的，其中一個(gè)很重要的原因在于，很多學(xué)生只是注重應(yīng)試技巧，對(duì)所謂“模板”趨之若鶩，而不是去著手提高語言能力。實(shí)際上，應(yīng)試技巧固然重要，但是要想真正在寫作考試中取得理想成績(jī)，還得從根本上去提高語言能力，因?yàn)閺母旧蟻碚f，雅思寫作考試考察的是考生能否用符合邏輯的語言去表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力。如果沒有打下良好的語言基礎(chǔ)，那么所謂的應(yīng)試技巧都將成為空中樓閣，徒有空架子而沒有內(nèi)容。對(duì)于很多考生而言，文章章法(即文章的行文思路、布局謀篇、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、邏輯順序)和想觀點(diǎn)也許不是最難的，難的是用具體的語言去表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)。
那么該怎樣去提高語言表達(dá)能力呢？研習(xí)、背誦和模仿范文(包括其他優(yōu)秀英文文章)是個(gè)有效的途徑。這是因?yàn)椋簩懽魇莻€(gè)語言輸出的過程，而要想保證輸出的質(zhì)量，就一定要保證有大量、高質(zhì)量的輸入。研習(xí)和背誦范文就是這樣的一個(gè)輸入和積累的過程。當(dāng)然，首先要搞清楚研習(xí)范文的含義。所謂研習(xí)范文，絕非僅僅是把別人的文章看懂，而是要本著獨(dú)立思考的精神，根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，研究并吸取范文中精華的部分。換句話說，就是要把范文中的漂亮詞匯和句型(但不限于詞匯和句型)通過背誦和重復(fù)記憶內(nèi)化成自己的東西，以便在以后寫作中的用到。所以，這個(gè)過程體現(xiàn)要體現(xiàn)出研習(xí)范文之后對(duì)今后寫作的影響。只有這樣做，才能從根本上避免很多同學(xué)把輸入范文和輸出寫作割裂開來的誤區(qū)，從而做到“范文好，我的作文也好”，并最終實(shí)現(xiàn)“大家好，才是真的好”的喜人場(chǎng)面。
接下來，以研習(xí)劍六G類的B篇考官范文為例，說明這個(gè)問題。
范文：劍六， P172
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children。
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for。
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問我們.感謝閱讀《研習(xí)范文》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《研習(xí)范文》。
However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the “hero” of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others。
Even when children use a computer of other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a children’s development that cannot be provided by a computer。
In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives。
I think the main point is to make sure the young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world。
研習(xí)過程：范文原句→啟示→對(duì)寫作的影響(模仿句)
1. 觀點(diǎn)不絕對(duì)
a。范文原句：
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day。
b。啟示：這句話中用到了tend to agree 這個(gè)短語，表示“傾向于同意”，表現(xiàn)出不絕對(duì)的語氣。
c。對(duì)寫作的影響(模仿范句)：
I am inclined to think that…; I tend to believe that…
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問我們.感謝閱讀《研習(xí)范文》一文.
龔朝暉簡(jiǎn)介：
武漢新航道學(xué)校雅思寫作講師，上外高級(jí)口譯，廈門大學(xué)口譯，英語專業(yè)碩士。多次在大型活動(dòng)中擔(dān)任口譯。曾獲得全國(guó)英語辯論賽三等獎(jiǎng)、湖北省口譯大賽一等獎(jiǎng)。有多年英語教學(xué)和培訓(xùn)經(jīng)歷，經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富。一路走來，驀然回首，發(fā)現(xiàn)還是鐘情于那傳播希望的綠色講臺(tái)和學(xué)生收獲后如花的笑靨。
眾所周知，雅思寫作往往是廣大雅思考生感到最頭疼的一個(gè)部分，也是得分最低的一項(xiàng)。以2008年為例，根據(jù)雅思官方的資料，08年中國(guó)大陸雅思考生平均成績(jī)5.46分，其中寫作最低，僅5.12分。
造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因是多方面的，其中一個(gè)很重要的原因在于，很多學(xué)生只是注重應(yīng)試技巧，對(duì)所謂“模板”趨之若鶩，而不是去著手提高語言能力。實(shí)際上，應(yīng)試技巧固然重要，但是要想真正在寫作考試中取得理想成績(jī)，還得從根本上去提高語言能力，因?yàn)閺母旧蟻碚f，雅思寫作考試考察的是考生能否用符合邏輯的語言去表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力。如果沒有打下良好的語言基礎(chǔ)，那么所謂的應(yīng)試技巧都將成為空中樓閣，徒有空架子而沒有內(nèi)容。對(duì)于很多考生而言，文章章法(即文章的行文思路、布局謀篇、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、邏輯順序)和想觀點(diǎn)也許不是最難的，難的是用具體的語言去表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)。
那么該怎樣去提高語言表達(dá)能力呢？研習(xí)、背誦和模仿范文(包括其他優(yōu)秀英文文章)是個(gè)有效的途徑。這是因?yàn)椋簩懽魇莻€(gè)語言輸出的過程，而要想保證輸出的質(zhì)量，就一定要保證有大量、高質(zhì)量的輸入。研習(xí)和背誦范文就是這樣的一個(gè)輸入和積累的過程。當(dāng)然，首先要搞清楚研習(xí)范文的含義。所謂研習(xí)范文，絕非僅僅是把別人的文章看懂，而是要本著獨(dú)立思考的精神，根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，研究并吸取范文中精華的部分。換句話說，就是要把范文中的漂亮詞匯和句型(但不限于詞匯和句型)通過背誦和重復(fù)記憶內(nèi)化成自己的東西，以便在以后寫作中的用到。所以，這個(gè)過程體現(xiàn)要體現(xiàn)出研習(xí)范文之后對(duì)今后寫作的影響。只有這樣做，才能從根本上避免很多同學(xué)把輸入范文和輸出寫作割裂開來的誤區(qū)，從而做到“范文好，我的作文也好”，并最終實(shí)現(xiàn)“大家好，才是真的好”的喜人場(chǎng)面。
接下來，以研習(xí)劍六G類的B篇考官范文為例，說明這個(gè)問題。
范文：劍六， P172
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children。
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for。
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問我們.感謝閱讀《研習(xí)范文》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《研習(xí)范文》。
However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the “hero” of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others。
Even when children use a computer of other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a children’s development that cannot be provided by a computer。
In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives。
I think the main point is to make sure the young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world。
研習(xí)過程：范文原句→啟示→對(duì)寫作的影響(模仿句)
1. 觀點(diǎn)不絕對(duì)
a。范文原句：
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day。
b。啟示：這句話中用到了tend to agree 這個(gè)短語，表示“傾向于同意”，表現(xiàn)出不絕對(duì)的語氣。
c。對(duì)寫作的影響(模仿范句)：
I am inclined to think that…; I tend to believe that…
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問我們.感謝閱讀《研習(xí)范文》一文.