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Coherence是雅思大作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，即文章的連貫性。連貫的語言可以使文章讀起來如行云流水，給人一氣呵成之感。但是，在寫作時(shí)，很多考生比較缺乏文章連貫的意識(shí)，或缺少使得語言表達(dá)連貫的方法，導(dǎo)致雅思大作文失分。鑒于此，專家將結(jié)合多年的考試及教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，給雅思考生們講解一下如何增強(qiáng)段落內(nèi)部的連貫性。
一、正確使用指代詞
使用的指代詞包括人稱代詞，物主代詞和一些特定的詞語。
★使用人稱代詞或物主代詞代替文章中重復(fù)出現(xiàn)的詞
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling theirchildren. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.
★使用特定的詞語來指代某一類事物
這些詞包括one, that, those, so, this, not和do的各種形式。同時(shí)，被替代的可以是名詞、動(dòng)詞，也可以是句子。
①替代名詞(用one, that, those來替代某個(gè)名詞)
劍橋7 test B task2范文中的句子：
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. However, it is also true that it is onlythose who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salary.
②替代動(dòng)詞(用do的各種形式來代替前面提到的動(dòng)詞)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.
③替代句子(用so, this, 或者not來替代一個(gè)句子)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.
二、正確使用意思相關(guān)聯(lián)的詞
使用同義詞，反義詞等意義相互關(guān)聯(lián)的詞可以提醒讀者一些相關(guān)的概念，而通過這些概念的反復(fù)出現(xiàn)達(dá)到與重復(fù)相類似的效果。
★同義詞
劍橋5 test B task2范文中的句子：
I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food.
★反義詞
劍橋5 test2 task2范文中的句子：
The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
★有相互補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的詞
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self controlordiscipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rulesin the way that their parents did.
劍橋5 test4 task2范文中的句子：
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before.
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Coherence是雅思大作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，即文章的連貫性。連貫的語言可以使文章讀起來如行云流水，給人一氣呵成之感。但是，在寫作時(shí)，很多考生比較缺乏文章連貫的意識(shí)，或缺少使得語言表達(dá)連貫的方法，導(dǎo)致雅思大作文失分。鑒于此，專家將結(jié)合多年的考試及教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，給雅思考生們講解一下如何增強(qiáng)段落內(nèi)部的連貫性。
一、正確使用指代詞
使用的指代詞包括人稱代詞，物主代詞和一些特定的詞語。
★使用人稱代詞或物主代詞代替文章中重復(fù)出現(xiàn)的詞
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling theirchildren. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.
★使用特定的詞語來指代某一類事物
這些詞包括one, that, those, so, this, not和do的各種形式。同時(shí)，被替代的可以是名詞、動(dòng)詞，也可以是句子。
①替代名詞(用one, that, those來替代某個(gè)名詞)
劍橋7 test B task2范文中的句子：
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. However, it is also true that it is onlythose who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salary.
②替代動(dòng)詞(用do的各種形式來代替前面提到的動(dòng)詞)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.
③替代句子(用so, this, 或者not來替代一個(gè)句子)
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.
二、正確使用意思相關(guān)聯(lián)的詞
使用同義詞，反義詞等意義相互關(guān)聯(lián)的詞可以提醒讀者一些相關(guān)的概念，而通過這些概念的反復(fù)出現(xiàn)達(dá)到與重復(fù)相類似的效果。
★同義詞
劍橋5 test B task2范文中的句子：
I think it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food.
★反義詞
劍橋5 test2 task2范文中的句子：
The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
★有相互補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的詞
劍橋4 test4 task2范文中的句子：
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self controlordiscipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rulesin the way that their parents did.
劍橋5 test4 task2范文中的句子：
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before.
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問我們.感謝閱讀《如何增強(qiáng)段落內(nèi)部的連貫性》一文.