2012雅思寫(xiě)作之模擬寫(xiě)作一范例

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    Task1:
    Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
    Topic:Comparethetypesofcommunicationusedin1962andin1982.
    Youshouldwriteaminimumof150words.
    P-phoneC-computerL-letter
    寫(xiě)作段落大意:
    Short/SimpleIntroduction.
    ParagraphtalkingaboutonebehaviourPattern.
    ParagraphtalkingaboutcontradictorybehaviourPattern.
    ConcludingRemark.
    ModelAnswers:
    1、GeneralOverview/Introduction.
    Thetwopiechartscomparedifferentmethodsofcommunicationusedin1962and1982.Wecanseethatforthethreemediumssurveyed,therearesignificantchangesforeach.
    2、Paragraphdealingwithinformationwhichdecreases.
    In1962,letterwritingwasthemostpopularformofcommunication,accountingfor50%ofthetotal.However,by1982,thisfigurefelltojust10%,thesmallestofthatyearsfigures.Inthisparagraph,wemakeitclear,whichtimeperiodwearewritingabout.Don'trepeat"theyear"againandagain.
    3、Paragraphdealingwithinformationwhichincreases.
    Bycontrast,wecanseethattheuseofthephoneandcomputersduringthissameperiodhavebothrisendramatically.Thetelephone,at60%becomesthemostusedformofcommunication,risingfrom35%.Similarily,theuseofcomputers,doublesto30%.(Noneedtouse15%.WecanunderstandOKusingthistypeofphrase.)Overall,wecanseesomeimportantchangesintheformsofcommunicationemployedduringthetwodecadessurveyed.
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