1. "Chinese people use trees as chopsticks."
(拿樹當(dāng)筷子?這筷子也太大了吧，應(yīng)該是use trees for making chopsticks吧?由此可見(jiàn)雅思口語(yǔ)中準(zhǔn)確使用動(dòng)詞的重要性。)
2. "I think environmantal protection is essential but not so important."
(典型的邏輯混亂，essential就等于very important，環(huán)保是至關(guān)重要但是不是那么重要的?....。.無(wú)語(yǔ)....。.)
3. "Without electricity, the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face."
(缺了至關(guān)重要的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)at night!這么說(shuō)的話古代人都是一直生活在伸手不見(jiàn)五指的黑暗中的嗎?)
4. "Watching TV is convenient and people can avoid traffic jam."
(這又是什么邏輯?看電視和避免交通擁擠有什么關(guān)系?)
5. "I like writing because it is good for your health."
(Why?)
6. "My grandmother is 98 years old so she is very pure."
(為什么98歲就必然“純潔”?)
7. "As we all know, every advantage has its disadvantage."
(....。.好深?yuàn)W....。.)
8. "The rate of net-cheating has boomed by 1.27% in the past 2 years."
(說(shuō)這句話的人一定是雅思圖表作文沒(méi)學(xué)好。Boom=Increase rapidly，增長(zhǎng)1.27%算rapid嗎?應(yīng)該用climb或edge up。)
9. "Modern ways of life brings people some healthy diseases."
(疾病還有“健康的疾病”?貌似說(shuō)這句話的人想表達(dá)的是"健康方面的疾病吧"?那就直接用desease就可以了，因?yàn)樗械募膊《际?ldquo;健康方面”的，要么還有哪方面的?)
10. "My father is a photograph......"
(我爸爸是一張照片?這個(gè)強(qiáng)勁的，應(yīng)該是photographer。)
(拿樹當(dāng)筷子?這筷子也太大了吧，應(yīng)該是use trees for making chopsticks吧?由此可見(jiàn)雅思口語(yǔ)中準(zhǔn)確使用動(dòng)詞的重要性。)
2. "I think environmantal protection is essential but not so important."
(典型的邏輯混亂，essential就等于very important，環(huán)保是至關(guān)重要但是不是那么重要的?....。.無(wú)語(yǔ)....。.)
3. "Without electricity, the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face."
(缺了至關(guān)重要的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)at night!這么說(shuō)的話古代人都是一直生活在伸手不見(jiàn)五指的黑暗中的嗎?)
4. "Watching TV is convenient and people can avoid traffic jam."
(這又是什么邏輯?看電視和避免交通擁擠有什么關(guān)系?)
5. "I like writing because it is good for your health."
(Why?)
6. "My grandmother is 98 years old so she is very pure."
(為什么98歲就必然“純潔”?)
7. "As we all know, every advantage has its disadvantage."
(....。.好深?yuàn)W....。.)
8. "The rate of net-cheating has boomed by 1.27% in the past 2 years."
(說(shuō)這句話的人一定是雅思圖表作文沒(méi)學(xué)好。Boom=Increase rapidly，增長(zhǎng)1.27%算rapid嗎?應(yīng)該用climb或edge up。)
9. "Modern ways of life brings people some healthy diseases."
(疾病還有“健康的疾病”?貌似說(shuō)這句話的人想表達(dá)的是"健康方面的疾病吧"?那就直接用desease就可以了，因?yàn)樗械募膊《际?ldquo;健康方面”的，要么還有哪方面的?)
10. "My father is a photograph......"
(我爸爸是一張照片?這個(gè)強(qiáng)勁的，應(yīng)該是photographer。)