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The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000. In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others. Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000. Long distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers, so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled.
Travels by walking, bicycles and local buses lost travelers’ favor in the one and a half decade. Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease, dropping
from 429 to 274, whilst the number of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively. Despite the decreases, however, the total miles travelled
grew from 4,740 to 6,475.
In brief, the total travelling distance in the country grew in 15 years when cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and other modes of travel were more popular and walking, bicycling and local transportation less popular. (212 words)
這兩篇范文出自不同作者之手，總體都屬于高分范文，但其實(shí)亮相比照之下質(zhì)量還是有明顯高下的。
這里正好來(lái)考考各位烤鴨的判斷力－你真的清楚到底怎么樣的作文才能在雅思考試當(dāng)中獲得8分以上的超高分嗎？
判斷的方法很簡(jiǎn)單：
下面的兩篇文章你覺(jué)得哪篇質(zhì)量更高？為什么？歡迎大家在評(píng)論欄踴躍投票選出你認(rèn)為更優(yōu)秀的那篇文章（說(shuō)明理由），這兩篇文章的詳細(xì)分析我過(guò)一段時(shí)間會(huì)另行刊出，對(duì)于猜對(duì)（......應(yīng)該說(shuō)“判斷正確”）并且評(píng)論最言之有理的同學(xué)有獎(jiǎng)！獎(jiǎng)品是俞老師免費(fèi)幫你“精改”雅思作文（就是很詳細(xì)的批改啦?。┮淮?！
The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000. In general, the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year: one enjoyed rising popularity while the other decreasing.
The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and others. Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years, with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000. Long distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers, so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled.
Travels by walking, bicycles and local buses lost travelers’ favor in the one and a half decade. Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease, dropping
from 429 to 274, whilst the number of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively. Despite the decreases, however, the total miles travelled
grew from 4,740 to 6,475.
In brief, the total travelling distance in the country grew in 15 years when cars, long distance buses, trains, taxis and other modes of travel were more popular and walking, bicycling and local transportation less popular. (212 words)
這兩篇范文出自不同作者之手，總體都屬于高分范文，但其實(shí)亮相比照之下質(zhì)量還是有明顯高下的。
這里正好來(lái)考考各位烤鴨的判斷力－你真的清楚到底怎么樣的作文才能在雅思考試當(dāng)中獲得8分以上的超高分嗎？
判斷的方法很簡(jiǎn)單：
下面的兩篇文章你覺(jué)得哪篇質(zhì)量更高？為什么？歡迎大家在評(píng)論欄踴躍投票選出你認(rèn)為更優(yōu)秀的那篇文章（說(shuō)明理由），這兩篇文章的詳細(xì)分析我過(guò)一段時(shí)間會(huì)另行刊出，對(duì)于猜對(duì)（......應(yīng)該說(shuō)“判斷正確”）并且評(píng)論最言之有理的同學(xué)有獎(jiǎng)！獎(jiǎng)品是俞老師免費(fèi)幫你“精改”雅思作文（就是很詳細(xì)的批改啦?。┮淮?！