Recently， the phenomenon of college students' getting married has caused public concern. From the legal point of view，college students should be given the right to choose an early marriage when they have found their beloved partners. But whether such choice is wise or not is quite another problem. I am opposed to marriage in college on account of its many disadvantages.
First， the biggest disadvantage， as far as I am concerned， is that college students， though physically mature， are not mentally and emotionally adult enough to take the responsibility of marriage.Marriage， apart from romance and promises， tastes bitter sometimes and appears to be more realistic and materialistic far beyond college students' imagination. They have to earn steady income to support family； they should take care of their behaviors instead of centering around only themselves； they also need to show loyalty to their marriage lots of things have to be cared about！ However， most college students， who themselves have not been independent financially of their parents， are far from fully prepared to take the responsibility of marriage. Love can never replace food to fill stomach， not can romance serve as fire to warm body up in winter. Then why should college lovebirds sign their names on the marriage certificate when in their hands only remain love and romance？
Besides， as to our college students， more things of greater importance stand before marriage， such as study， work， fulfilling the goal of life， making contributions to society and so on.Marriage is only part of life， not all of it. For college students，the main task is to study and get fully prepared before stepping into this competitive society. But still I've heard ora story about a 20 year-old girl who left college to get married with a rich man and later gave birth to a baby. The girl never went back to college again and her ambition of career remained nothing but a dream. Surely， such things won't happen to all the college couples， but the story shows us that marriage， being too time and energy consuming， is something we college students couldn't afford. So， we almost haven't plenty of time to deal with the piled exercise books， let alone marriage！
Last but not the least， the one you love in college may not be your suitable "better half" and an early marriage during college life is not always a wise one. You see， it is common for college students to get married in the U. S. ， but the divorce rate there is surprisingly high. A marriage ending up in divorce could not be a wise one and nor could a mate destined to be separated from you be regarded as a suitable partner. As was sung by the Beatles "Life Begins at Forty"， I would like to say that a perfect marriage occurs usually after 28， when we have gained much experience of life and have built a solid financial foundation.
Certainly， an early marriage does show some benefits. As the younger parents will only be senior to their kids by some 20 years， the generation gap will be considerably narrowed and the parents will have more energy to play with their children. What a wonderful imaginary picture a lovely kid is running after his or her young parents playing hide and seek on the grassland，bursting out happy laughter from time to time， with the sun giving off pleasant warmness！
In sum， college students have the right to marry a suitable partner. However， they're not supposed to do so. Think twice before you leap， and it will benefit your whole life.
簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)
隨著社會(huì)開(kāi)放程度的提高，大學(xué)生的權(quán)利意識(shí)日益增強(qiáng)，象牙塔里是否能夠筑愛(ài)巢，一時(shí)間也成了爭(zhēng)論焦點(diǎn)。江崢同學(xué)對(duì)這一問(wèn)題保持著冷靜的頭腦，有理有據(jù)地駁斥了愛(ài)情至上論者，得出結(jié)論：在校生結(jié)婚弊大于利。
文章結(jié)合大學(xué)生的成長(zhǎng)特點(diǎn)和婚姻生活的現(xiàn)實(shí)要求，論證了早婚者將會(huì)面臨的生活壓力和早婚對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)及未來(lái)所造成的負(fù)面影響。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，關(guān)聯(lián)詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，起承轉(zhuǎn)合都有章法。各段主題句圍繞全文中心層層展開(kāi)論述，擺事實(shí)，講道理，論證充分，說(shuō)理明白。但是，倒數(shù)第二段突然轉(zhuǎn)而論述大學(xué)生早婚的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，在缺少與上下文的銜接的情況下，顯得過(guò)于突兀，本來(lái)這是一種讓步的寫(xiě)法，即承認(rèn)自己否定的觀點(diǎn)也有一定道理。但沒(méi)有注意從讓步自然地回歸主題，就使這部分內(nèi)容與文章的論點(diǎn)不符。
First， the biggest disadvantage， as far as I am concerned， is that college students， though physically mature， are not mentally and emotionally adult enough to take the responsibility of marriage.Marriage， apart from romance and promises， tastes bitter sometimes and appears to be more realistic and materialistic far beyond college students' imagination. They have to earn steady income to support family； they should take care of their behaviors instead of centering around only themselves； they also need to show loyalty to their marriage lots of things have to be cared about！ However， most college students， who themselves have not been independent financially of their parents， are far from fully prepared to take the responsibility of marriage. Love can never replace food to fill stomach， not can romance serve as fire to warm body up in winter. Then why should college lovebirds sign their names on the marriage certificate when in their hands only remain love and romance？
Besides， as to our college students， more things of greater importance stand before marriage， such as study， work， fulfilling the goal of life， making contributions to society and so on.Marriage is only part of life， not all of it. For college students，the main task is to study and get fully prepared before stepping into this competitive society. But still I've heard ora story about a 20 year-old girl who left college to get married with a rich man and later gave birth to a baby. The girl never went back to college again and her ambition of career remained nothing but a dream. Surely， such things won't happen to all the college couples， but the story shows us that marriage， being too time and energy consuming， is something we college students couldn't afford. So， we almost haven't plenty of time to deal with the piled exercise books， let alone marriage！
Last but not the least， the one you love in college may not be your suitable "better half" and an early marriage during college life is not always a wise one. You see， it is common for college students to get married in the U. S. ， but the divorce rate there is surprisingly high. A marriage ending up in divorce could not be a wise one and nor could a mate destined to be separated from you be regarded as a suitable partner. As was sung by the Beatles "Life Begins at Forty"， I would like to say that a perfect marriage occurs usually after 28， when we have gained much experience of life and have built a solid financial foundation.
Certainly， an early marriage does show some benefits. As the younger parents will only be senior to their kids by some 20 years， the generation gap will be considerably narrowed and the parents will have more energy to play with their children. What a wonderful imaginary picture a lovely kid is running after his or her young parents playing hide and seek on the grassland，bursting out happy laughter from time to time， with the sun giving off pleasant warmness！
In sum， college students have the right to marry a suitable partner. However， they're not supposed to do so. Think twice before you leap， and it will benefit your whole life.
簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)
隨著社會(huì)開(kāi)放程度的提高，大學(xué)生的權(quán)利意識(shí)日益增強(qiáng)，象牙塔里是否能夠筑愛(ài)巢，一時(shí)間也成了爭(zhēng)論焦點(diǎn)。江崢同學(xué)對(duì)這一問(wèn)題保持著冷靜的頭腦，有理有據(jù)地駁斥了愛(ài)情至上論者，得出結(jié)論：在校生結(jié)婚弊大于利。
文章結(jié)合大學(xué)生的成長(zhǎng)特點(diǎn)和婚姻生活的現(xiàn)實(shí)要求，論證了早婚者將會(huì)面臨的生活壓力和早婚對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)及未來(lái)所造成的負(fù)面影響。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，關(guān)聯(lián)詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，起承轉(zhuǎn)合都有章法。各段主題句圍繞全文中心層層展開(kāi)論述，擺事實(shí)，講道理，論證充分，說(shuō)理明白。但是，倒數(shù)第二段突然轉(zhuǎn)而論述大學(xué)生早婚的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，在缺少與上下文的銜接的情況下，顯得過(guò)于突兀，本來(lái)這是一種讓步的寫(xiě)法，即承認(rèn)自己否定的觀點(diǎn)也有一定道理。但沒(méi)有注意從讓步自然地回歸主題，就使這部分內(nèi)容與文章的論點(diǎn)不符。