English is my favorite subject and I once won a second prize in Sichuan English Reading Comprehension Competition for Middle School Students （四川省中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)閱讀競(jìng)賽）。 Now I'm good at English and one of the best students at English in our senior grade one . [Now I think I can use English better and I am one of the students in the class who do best in English examinations. ] （1） How have I studied English？
First， I read a lot of English， beginning from junior time [the time when I was a junior middle school student ] （ 2 ） . I read many English stories and jokes. I didn't get bored because the stories and jokes were interesting. Thus I have got to be more and more interested in English and learned a lot of the language through reading widely.
Second， I have kept a diary in English. I just write down what I do， what I see and what I think of every day. I try my best to express myself in the most simple words. In this way Ihave improved my writing ability a lot. On the other hand， this diary writing has also helped me to form the habit to think in English.
The above are my two ways of English study. Would you please try them if you're interested？
四川省云陽(yáng)中學(xué)高一（3）班 劉萬(wàn)云
評(píng) 語(yǔ)
文章用羅列法展開(kāi)介紹了自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的體會(huì)，對(duì)同齡人有一定的啟發(fā)。文章中某些語(yǔ)言上的不足之處點(diǎn)評(píng)修改如下：
（1）原文似乎有不夠謙虛之嫌，改后較為客觀。
（2）原文junior time （初中時(shí)候）表達(dá)不規(guī)范。故改之。其實(shí)原文還可簡(jiǎn)寫(xiě)成：I began to read a lot of English when I was a junior middle school student.
First， I read a lot of English， beginning from junior time [the time when I was a junior middle school student ] （ 2 ） . I read many English stories and jokes. I didn't get bored because the stories and jokes were interesting. Thus I have got to be more and more interested in English and learned a lot of the language through reading widely.
Second， I have kept a diary in English. I just write down what I do， what I see and what I think of every day. I try my best to express myself in the most simple words. In this way Ihave improved my writing ability a lot. On the other hand， this diary writing has also helped me to form the habit to think in English.
The above are my two ways of English study. Would you please try them if you're interested？
四川省云陽(yáng)中學(xué)高一（3）班 劉萬(wàn)云
評(píng) 語(yǔ)
文章用羅列法展開(kāi)介紹了自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的體會(huì)，對(duì)同齡人有一定的啟發(fā)。文章中某些語(yǔ)言上的不足之處點(diǎn)評(píng)修改如下：
（1）原文似乎有不夠謙虛之嫌，改后較為客觀。
（2）原文junior time （初中時(shí)候）表達(dá)不規(guī)范。故改之。其實(shí)原文還可簡(jiǎn)寫(xiě)成：I began to read a lot of English when I was a junior middle school student.