2007年12月英語六級短文改錯(四十八)

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Jane Adams came from a well-to-do and cultural family. She was so
    distressed about the misery of poor people as she left her fine home to ___1___
    spend her life in slums of Chicago. In 1889, she established a settlement ___2___
    house where she initiated many projects such as hot lunch service that for ___3___
    factory workers, day care centers for children, free classes for young
    and adults, gymnasium and art gallery. Immigrants and other poor people
    came to her settlement house for advice and help, as well for fun. ___4___
    Jane Adams was also passive in fighting against the use of child labor ___5___
    and against war. She work for women’s right to vote and for improving ___6___
    the situation of the blacks. She initiated country vocation program for
    poor city children. Jane Adams had a great influence to the development ___7___
    of social work in the United States and in other parts of the world She
    promoted the idea of responsibility for the welfare of the poor. Settlement
    houses of a similar kind was founded in many poor neighborhood to make ___8___
    the lives of the poor more meaningful. In 1931, Jane Adams was rewarded ___9___
    the Nobel Prize for which she had done for the society. ___10___
    答案及解析:
    1. as -> that
    此處是so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)。....so distressed......that she left.....
    2. slums前加the
    slums后有of Chicago作后置定語,所以定冠詞the 不能省略。
    3. that -> /
    that作引導(dǎo)詞時,后面接的是句子,在本題中that后面是短語for factory workers,所以不用that。
    4. well后加as
    5. passive -> active
    passive意為“消極的,被動的”。從文中可知Jane Adams是一位熱心服務(wù)的人,因此她應(yīng)該是積極的而不是消極地為人權(quán)而戰(zhàn)。所以要把passive改為active“積極的”。
    6. work –> worked
    根據(jù)整篇文章的時態(tài)可知,此處應(yīng)該是過去時。
    7. to -> on
    have an influence / effect / impact on為固定搭配,意為“對…的影響”。
    8. was -> were
    此處的主語是Settlement houses,所以謂語動詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
    9. rewarded -> awarded
    reward意為“報答,酬謝,獎勵”;award意為“授予,給予”。此處的意思應(yīng)該是Jane Adams被授予諾貝爾獎,所以要用award。
    10. which -> what
    此處what引導(dǎo)名詞性從句作done的賓語,整個名詞性從句what she had done for the society作介詞for的賓語。