「要求」
為了配合國(guó)際能源周活動(dòng)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)周報(bào)要發(fā)行一期能源特刊，總編周老師約你圍繞“電”這個(gè)主題寫一篇稿，并給出了提綱。
電在我們的社會(huì)中發(fā)揮著至關(guān)重要的作用。
如果沒(méi)有電，……
由此看來(lái)，……
「范文」
Electricity
Electricity plays a vital role in our society. First of all， electricity is used for lighting. Electric lamps illuminate millions of families， bringing people brightness， comfort and convenience. Secondly， in industry， as one source of energy， electricity is used to drive machines. It helps to raise productivity， which makes it possible for mankind to produce a great quantity of goods. Moreover， electrified trains， films， televisions and refrigerators are all based on electricity.
If the world were deprived of electricity， the whole society would be unable to function in its normal way. Cities would be plunged into darkness， industrial production would be reduced to standstill， and all electric apparatus would stop working. In shout， people would feel totally helpless.
Therefore， on the one hand， we must waste no electricity， on the other we should develop our electric industry so as to generate sufficient electric power to meet the need of society.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文根據(jù)題目給出的提示展開(kāi)議論。第一段舉出事實(shí)說(shuō)明電在當(dāng)今社會(huì)所起的巨大作用；第二段寫如果沒(méi)有電，人類社會(huì)就無(wú)法正常運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)；第三段寫既然電如此重要，我們應(yīng)該大力發(fā)展電力工業(yè)，并節(jié)約用電。全文層次分明，主題突出。舉例恰當(dāng)， 語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，表達(dá)清楚。
為了配合國(guó)際能源周活動(dòng)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)周報(bào)要發(fā)行一期能源特刊，總編周老師約你圍繞“電”這個(gè)主題寫一篇稿，并給出了提綱。
電在我們的社會(huì)中發(fā)揮著至關(guān)重要的作用。
如果沒(méi)有電，……
由此看來(lái)，……
「范文」
Electricity
Electricity plays a vital role in our society. First of all， electricity is used for lighting. Electric lamps illuminate millions of families， bringing people brightness， comfort and convenience. Secondly， in industry， as one source of energy， electricity is used to drive machines. It helps to raise productivity， which makes it possible for mankind to produce a great quantity of goods. Moreover， electrified trains， films， televisions and refrigerators are all based on electricity.
If the world were deprived of electricity， the whole society would be unable to function in its normal way. Cities would be plunged into darkness， industrial production would be reduced to standstill， and all electric apparatus would stop working. In shout， people would feel totally helpless.
Therefore， on the one hand， we must waste no electricity， on the other we should develop our electric industry so as to generate sufficient electric power to meet the need of society.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文根據(jù)題目給出的提示展開(kāi)議論。第一段舉出事實(shí)說(shuō)明電在當(dāng)今社會(huì)所起的巨大作用；第二段寫如果沒(méi)有電，人類社會(huì)就無(wú)法正常運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)；第三段寫既然電如此重要，我們應(yīng)該大力發(fā)展電力工業(yè)，并節(jié)約用電。全文層次分明，主題突出。舉例恰當(dāng)， 語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，表達(dá)清楚。