本期作文題目：
寫一封正式的信件，邀請(qǐng)一位記者參加發(fā)布會(huì)，字?jǐn)?shù)在120-140左右。
信件須包含以下五個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
1.產(chǎn)品名稱
2.產(chǎn)品發(fā)布會(huì)地點(diǎn)
3.這一活動(dòng)的日期和時(shí)間
4.活動(dòng)計(jì)劃的一些具體內(nèi)容
5.回復(fù)的最后期限
老師指點(diǎn)：
首先，寫商務(wù)信函的具體格式和要求如下：
1.寫信人的地址；
2.收信人地址；
3.參考
注：一般商業(yè)信函中有的一個(gè)注解，通常包括信函簽字人和打字人的姓名首字母縮寫，有時(shí)候也有部門名稱的縮寫，這樣以備存檔和查找方便。
4.日期；
5.格式化的開(kāi)頭；
6.標(biāo)題；
7.正文；
8.結(jié)束語(yǔ)；
9.簽名；
10.姓名及職位；
11.附件。
網(wǎng)友作文一：
Dear Sir or Madam:
I[1] am writing to invite you for a new mobile telephone release comference.There will be a New Product & Trends Presentation in Qinhua Saloon at 9 o'clock on Saturday morning.Our manager will present and answer your[2] questions.
Please inform us before Friday this week so as to facilitate our arrangements in advance.
Looking forward to your reply
Faithfully,
XXX[3]
[1]開(kāi)頭可以有一句：With reference to your letter of the 15th this month, 或者：I am very honored to invite you to attend the ....因?yàn)槿绻耆珱](méi)有之前的業(yè)務(wù)咨詢或者往來(lái)，發(fā)出這樣一封邀請(qǐng)信會(huì)比較唐突，換個(gè)角度想想，你要是記者，會(huì)接受這樣一個(gè)突如其來(lái)，沒(méi)有任何先兆和信息的邀請(qǐng)信么？
[2]回答什么問(wèn)題，可以用enclosure 的形式體現(xiàn)，因?yàn)樽謹(jǐn)?shù)限制。
[3]格式不對(duì)
網(wǎng)友作文二：
Dear Mr. Simth,
I am writing to invite you to take part in[1] our new product Model 123 printer announcement event, which will be held on the banquet hall of China Grand Hotel.
On[2] the event, the printer's functions will be descibed in detail, and you will have chance to experience yourself on the new product. And there is a cocktail party in the evening. Please pay attention to the following notes:
Place: on the 3rd floor,the banquet hall of China Grand Hotel
Time: 15:00 on July 4, 2008
Would you please fax me a reply before July 2 in case of your seat[3].
Looking farward to your prompt reply and expecting your attendence. [4]
Best regards[5],
Applegreenjh
[1]換成：attend/present 都可以。這個(gè)詞組一般指群眾集會(huì)型
[2]During
[3]For reserving/booking.
[4]好句子，回歸本色。
[5]Yours faithfully
網(wǎng)友作文三：
Dear Brian,
I represent the D&G Electronics Company in HongKong, and invite you to attend our new product –multifunction watch press, which will be held on Tuesday, 1st July. The latest product of this press is a new-model and unique watch, not as normal as others[1] , whose functions have games ,in particular, mp3 & digital player. We believe such a product would lead another fresh trend in market. If you could present in the press, please fill up the VIP card enclosed by return before Saturday,28th June.
We look forward to your attendance.
Best wishes[2] ,
Jolene
[1]廢話，前面用了unique, 這里就不要再用了。
[2]問(wèn)題同上，格式和稱謂。
寫一封正式的信件，邀請(qǐng)一位記者參加發(fā)布會(huì)，字?jǐn)?shù)在120-140左右。
信件須包含以下五個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
1.產(chǎn)品名稱
2.產(chǎn)品發(fā)布會(huì)地點(diǎn)
3.這一活動(dòng)的日期和時(shí)間
4.活動(dòng)計(jì)劃的一些具體內(nèi)容
5.回復(fù)的最后期限
老師指點(diǎn)：
首先，寫商務(wù)信函的具體格式和要求如下：
1.寫信人的地址；
2.收信人地址；
3.參考
注：一般商業(yè)信函中有的一個(gè)注解，通常包括信函簽字人和打字人的姓名首字母縮寫，有時(shí)候也有部門名稱的縮寫，這樣以備存檔和查找方便。
4.日期；
5.格式化的開(kāi)頭；
6.標(biāo)題；
7.正文；
8.結(jié)束語(yǔ)；
9.簽名；
10.姓名及職位；
11.附件。
網(wǎng)友作文一：
Dear Sir or Madam:
I[1] am writing to invite you for a new mobile telephone release comference.There will be a New Product & Trends Presentation in Qinhua Saloon at 9 o'clock on Saturday morning.Our manager will present and answer your[2] questions.
Please inform us before Friday this week so as to facilitate our arrangements in advance.
Looking forward to your reply
Faithfully,
XXX[3]
[1]開(kāi)頭可以有一句：With reference to your letter of the 15th this month, 或者：I am very honored to invite you to attend the ....因?yàn)槿绻耆珱](méi)有之前的業(yè)務(wù)咨詢或者往來(lái)，發(fā)出這樣一封邀請(qǐng)信會(huì)比較唐突，換個(gè)角度想想，你要是記者，會(huì)接受這樣一個(gè)突如其來(lái)，沒(méi)有任何先兆和信息的邀請(qǐng)信么？
[2]回答什么問(wèn)題，可以用enclosure 的形式體現(xiàn)，因?yàn)樽謹(jǐn)?shù)限制。
[3]格式不對(duì)
網(wǎng)友作文二：
Dear Mr. Simth,
I am writing to invite you to take part in[1] our new product Model 123 printer announcement event, which will be held on the banquet hall of China Grand Hotel.
On[2] the event, the printer's functions will be descibed in detail, and you will have chance to experience yourself on the new product. And there is a cocktail party in the evening. Please pay attention to the following notes:
Place: on the 3rd floor,the banquet hall of China Grand Hotel
Time: 15:00 on July 4, 2008
Would you please fax me a reply before July 2 in case of your seat[3].
Looking farward to your prompt reply and expecting your attendence. [4]
Best regards[5],
Applegreenjh
[1]換成：attend/present 都可以。這個(gè)詞組一般指群眾集會(huì)型
[2]During
[3]For reserving/booking.
[4]好句子，回歸本色。
[5]Yours faithfully
網(wǎng)友作文三：
Dear Brian,
I represent the D&G Electronics Company in HongKong, and invite you to attend our new product –multifunction watch press, which will be held on Tuesday, 1st July. The latest product of this press is a new-model and unique watch, not as normal as others[1] , whose functions have games ,in particular, mp3 & digital player. We believe such a product would lead another fresh trend in market. If you could present in the press, please fill up the VIP card enclosed by return before Saturday,28th June.
We look forward to your attendance.
Best wishes[2] ,
Jolene
[1]廢話，前面用了unique, 這里就不要再用了。
[2]問(wèn)題同上，格式和稱謂。