第一段(描述現(xiàn)象)Nowaday there is often a lack of understanding between A and B.On the one hand, A find it difficult to……。On the other hand, B complain that …… are too "old-fashioned"(to)……。So whenever…… are in trouble ,they will seek help from …… instead of from……
第二段(分析原因)There are some possible reasons for the problem.In the first place,……。In the second place,……put too much pressure on ……and spare little time to ……。Finally…… (參考原因:Even if A listen to the explanation of B, A often disagree with B.) As a result, the problem is becoming more and more serious.
第三段(對癥下藥,給出建議。)To bridge the (gap) between A and B, both of them should be co-operative. For A ,they should be considerate of …… ( for the sake of …… ). As for B, they should ……。With joint efforts, A and B can reach a better understanding……
筆者注:模式中的每一段基本都由首句,擴展句,結(jié)論三部份組成,此后模式中此類注釋將部份同前省略。
類比型
1,立足兩事物間的共性,闡述二者之間的相似之處(比較法)
2,立足各自的個性,闡述二者之間的差異 (對照法)
第一段(A的好處)Many people appreciate the conveniences of A.……。Also,……。
第二段(B的好處)But B is also attractive.……
第三段(A,B各自的不足)However, either A or B has its own disadvantages. A are confronted with many problems. Such as…… and so on. But B……
第四段(我的選擇)As for me, I prefer to A. First,……。Second,(參考原因:compared with the undeveloped factors of B, A is an adeal…… for me to……(最后談對A不足的補救措施)Of course……
對待某事物與成功的關(guān)系(以機遇為例)
第一段(首句引出機遇——機不可失,失不再來)Opportunities don`t come often.(擴展句1機遇常常悄然離去)They come every once in a while. Very often, they come quietly and go by without being noticed.(結(jié)論珍惜機遇)Therefore, it is advisable that you should value and treat them with care.
第二段(首句說明機遇的偶然性) When an opportunity presents itself(來到時),it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. (擴展句1抓住機遇,實現(xiàn)成功的途徑)If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.(擴展句2反證法)Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit you. (結(jié)論必須做好一切可能的準備)It is clear that it order to be highly qualified for our future jobs. We should make every possible preparation.
第三段(Relationship between opportunity and success——首句說明處理機遇的態(tài)度是成功者與失敗者之間的區(qū)別) The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities.(擴展句1成功者的態(tài)度)The successfull person always make adequate preparations to meet…… as they duly arrive.(擴展句2失敗者的態(tài)度)The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by.(結(jié)論)Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite different consequences.
第四段(我的觀點) In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose.
筆者注:(1)全文選取該文做為自己的一個模式,是認為此類文章有一定的普遍性??佳袝r此類作文雖給出題綱,但短時間內(nèi)不好擴展,有時甚至無話可說。所以對與此類文章,還是該早做準備——加以總結(jié)歸納。
(2)此模式中大部份諸如“If you want to achieve something…… make efforts and get prepared.”等的句子實際也是模式說理句型,可運用于多種環(huán)境之中。平時要注意此類說理句型的總結(jié),將其納入模式之中。
(3)特別像此類不好說具體道理的文章,尤其要注意文章的開頭,結(jié)尾以及中間段的頭尾的啟,乘,轉(zhuǎn),合之處。因為考試中說理部份大家都可能差不多半斤八兩。
(4)“presents itself”= come,但在文中多用此類的新詞(大學(xué)學(xué)的詞或短語),這樣就有可能成為亮點。
第二段(分析原因)There are some possible reasons for the problem.In the first place,……。In the second place,……put too much pressure on ……and spare little time to ……。Finally…… (參考原因:Even if A listen to the explanation of B, A often disagree with B.) As a result, the problem is becoming more and more serious.
第三段(對癥下藥,給出建議。)To bridge the (gap) between A and B, both of them should be co-operative. For A ,they should be considerate of …… ( for the sake of …… ). As for B, they should ……。With joint efforts, A and B can reach a better understanding……
筆者注:模式中的每一段基本都由首句,擴展句,結(jié)論三部份組成,此后模式中此類注釋將部份同前省略。
類比型
1,立足兩事物間的共性,闡述二者之間的相似之處(比較法)
2,立足各自的個性,闡述二者之間的差異 (對照法)
第一段(A的好處)Many people appreciate the conveniences of A.……。Also,……。
第二段(B的好處)But B is also attractive.……
第三段(A,B各自的不足)However, either A or B has its own disadvantages. A are confronted with many problems. Such as…… and so on. But B……
第四段(我的選擇)As for me, I prefer to A. First,……。Second,(參考原因:compared with the undeveloped factors of B, A is an adeal…… for me to……(最后談對A不足的補救措施)Of course……
對待某事物與成功的關(guān)系(以機遇為例)
第一段(首句引出機遇——機不可失,失不再來)Opportunities don`t come often.(擴展句1機遇常常悄然離去)They come every once in a while. Very often, they come quietly and go by without being noticed.(結(jié)論珍惜機遇)Therefore, it is advisable that you should value and treat them with care.
第二段(首句說明機遇的偶然性) When an opportunity presents itself(來到時),it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. (擴展句1抓住機遇,實現(xiàn)成功的途徑)If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.(擴展句2反證法)Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to visit you. (結(jié)論必須做好一切可能的準備)It is clear that it order to be highly qualified for our future jobs. We should make every possible preparation.
第三段(Relationship between opportunity and success——首句說明處理機遇的態(tài)度是成功者與失敗者之間的區(qū)別) The difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not lies only in the way each treats opportunities.(擴展句1成功者的態(tài)度)The successfull person always make adequate preparations to meet…… as they duly arrive.(擴展句2失敗者的態(tài)度)The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works little and just waits to see them pass by.(結(jié)論)Obviously, the two different attitudes towards opportunities may lead to quite different consequences.
第四段(我的觀點) In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose.
筆者注:(1)全文選取該文做為自己的一個模式,是認為此類文章有一定的普遍性??佳袝r此類作文雖給出題綱,但短時間內(nèi)不好擴展,有時甚至無話可說。所以對與此類文章,還是該早做準備——加以總結(jié)歸納。
(2)此模式中大部份諸如“If you want to achieve something…… make efforts and get prepared.”等的句子實際也是模式說理句型,可運用于多種環(huán)境之中。平時要注意此類說理句型的總結(jié),將其納入模式之中。
(3)特別像此類不好說具體道理的文章,尤其要注意文章的開頭,結(jié)尾以及中間段的頭尾的啟,乘,轉(zhuǎn),合之處。因為考試中說理部份大家都可能差不多半斤八兩。
(4)“presents itself”= come,但在文中多用此類的新詞(大學(xué)學(xué)的詞或短語),這樣就有可能成為亮點。