匯豐銀行商務(wù)寫作教程(4)2

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    29 May 200X
    34D Scenic Lane
    Discovery Bay
    Lantau Island
    Dear Ms Hui
    Classic Visa Card: Annual Fee
    Thank you for your letter of 5 November. In the letter, you mentioned that you had sent a cheque to settle your Visa Card Annual Fee.
    I would like to explain the situation.
    We have checked our records carefully. Unfortunately, we have not yet received the cheque, although we are normally very efficient when dealing with incoming remittances.
    Therefore, to help us prepare your new Visa Card, we would be grateful if you could settle the payment immediately.
    We look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours sincerely
    Lily Tam
    Customer Service Manager.
    Answers:
    Paragraph1: background
    Paragraph2: writer’s purpose
    Paragraph3: reader’s information
    Paragraph4: reader’s response
    Paragraph5: closing marks
    As you can see, there is only a small difference in the outlines you use when writing to colleagues and customers.
    When you write to customers, you include a salutation (Dear...) and a complimentary close (Yours sincerely / faithfully).
    When writing to customers, you always add a polite closing remark. You can also add this remark when writing to colleagues.
    By now, you should be familiar with
    the types of correspondence you write
    the types of documents you can use
    the basic outline you can usually follow.
    To learn how to organise a letter to a customer, go to the next screen.Below, you will see samples of four documents