專業(yè)八級改錯練習-11

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Artists use caricature to distort the human face or figure for comic affect, __1__while at the same time capturing an identifiable likeness and suggests the essence __2__of the personality or character beneath the surface. The humor lies in the fact __3__the caricature is recognizable, and yet exaggerated.
    From their origin in Europe as witty sketches, caricature grew through __4__the eighteenth and nineteenth century, becoming enormously popular in __5__the United States early in this century. In 1920s and 1930s especially, this lively form of illustration was appeared in newspapers and __6__magazines throughout the country. The caricaturists in this era drew his __7__portraits of important figures primary to entertain. In spirit their work was __8__close to the humor of the fast-developing comic strip and gag cartoon than to the __9__string of political satire. Their subjects were more often amusing than offended __10__by amiable attacks.
    【答案】
    1 將affect改為effect,affect是動詞。effect是名詞。
    2 將suggests改為 suggesting,這是一個以while引導的從句,其中suggest應該與capturing并列。
    3 在fact后面加上that,因為引導同位語從句的關系詞不可以省略。
    4 將their改為its,這里its指代單數(shù)名詞caricature
    5 將century改為復數(shù)形式
    6 將was省略,appear是不及物動詞,不應用于被動語態(tài)。
    7 將his改為their,這里指代復數(shù)名詞 the caricaturists
    8 將primary改為primarily,primarily在這里做狀語,修飾不定式短語
    9 將close改為比較級形式closer,從后面的連詞than,可以看出,這里使用了比較狀語從句
    10 將amusing改為 amused,主語subject(受攻擊的人)和amuse的邏輯關系是動賓關系,應使用過去分詞形式。