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Transport can be a major expense for many companies,especially when cars have to be provided for both managerial and sale staff. __1__ As a result, it's important to keep a close eye at the many costs __2__ associated with company cars and how these different costs compare.
    The moment a new car is driven away from the showroom,its value will drop as much as 12 percent. This is what is __3__ known as depreciation and is the largest single cost to the buyer of a new vehicle. Depreciation is the highest in the __4__ first two years of a vehicle's life: at the end of that period a car could be worth just the third of its brand new price. __5__ Although the rate of depreciation decreases as time goes by, it remains a major cost factor, as around 85 percent of company vehicles are brought brandly new. __6__ However, it is important to know that some cars depreciate much more than others——regardless of price. This is often __7__to do with rarity and prestige value. The more common the car, the more quickly, in general, it loses vaule. Exported __8__ models, which are restricted in number, can hold their value better than those are produced domestically and widely available. __9__ In the same way, depreciation on a new model of a particular make may be low for the first few years after their launch. __10__ This happened when diesel cars were first introduced. They depreciated more slowly when they were rarely seen; now that they are relatively common, this is no longer true.
    答案:  
    1. sale—sales。名詞做定語時(shí)一般用單數(shù)形式,但在個(gè)別情況下也需要用復(fù)數(shù)。此處sales便是這種情況。再如 arms race 軍備競賽,savings bank儲(chǔ)蓄銀行。
    2. at—on。keep an eye on為固定搭配。
    3.drop后面加by。by與as much as 12 percent結(jié)合,做謂語動(dòng)詞drop的表示程度的狀語。
    4. 刪除highest之前的the  
    5. the—a。序數(shù)詞表示次序時(shí)要用定冠詞修飾。
    6. brandly—brand?!皪湫碌亍绷?xí)慣用brand new或brand-new,此處修飾brought,做狀語,意義相當(dāng)于“嶄新地”。
    7. more—less。less所在的句子是該段落的主題句,據(jù)該段落的細(xì)節(jié)可知應(yīng)為less。
    8. Exported—Imported。根據(jù)常識(shí),進(jìn)口車由于其進(jìn)口的數(shù)量受到限制,有可能比國產(chǎn)車貶值得慢一些。
    9. are之前加which/that 或 刪除are。要么使用定語從句修飾those,妖媚用形容詞做those的補(bǔ)足語。
    10. their—its/the。據(jù)上下文,its或the指代或特指a new model of a particular make