1.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行 例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 當使用連詞將一系列的單詞 聯(lián)接起來的時候，應(yīng)當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語?！?BR> 2.不知所云 例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落過長，不分段 主語與動詞一致問題 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主語和動詞在數(shù)方面不一 致?！?BR> 4.句子別扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辭過長或不清。換 言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑?！?BR> 5.不要使用縮寫 在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can’t， don’t，it’s， we’ll， they’ve等等) ，而應(yīng)當使用單詞完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)?！?BR> 6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復(fù) Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在該句的主要 主語和主要動詞前使用連詞?！?BR> 7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞，因為其實它應(yīng)是一個從句。這是桓齜淺? 常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。
8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過于含糊，不適合用在正式的 場合。應(yīng)將get改為一個更加具體的單詞，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等?！?BR> 9.書寫難以辨認 信息不正確 I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 傳的信息不正確，或 者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確（如果確實是正確的，應(yīng)當解釋為什么這樣，因為讀者 不認為是正確的）。上述例句中，all的意思是；我們不能絕對地說每一件新 東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險起見，應(yīng)當使用many或most?！》怯⒄Z單詞 Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 盡管看起來象個單詞， 其實不是，至少不是個英文單詞。使用這個單詞的另一種形式?！?BR> 10.介詞多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We
went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表 示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown，home，there， here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞?！?BR> 11.跑題或不相關(guān) There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 這個意思與文章的主題無關(guān)?！?BR> 12.陳詞濫調(diào) It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表 達的意思很普通 大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒有必要再說出來?！?BR> 13.標點問題 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 這是一 個非常普遍的問題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號，尤其是當他們用手寫的時 候?！?BR> 14.重復(fù)冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個詞語不必要?！?BR> 15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞 需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單 獨使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫錯誤 主語、動詞或賓語有問題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題 缺少主語、動詞或賓 語，或者這些成分重復(fù)?！?BR> 17.語氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo,
and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過于正式或者太不正式。
3.段落過長，不分段 主語與動詞一致問題 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主語和動詞在數(shù)方面不一 致?！?BR> 4.句子別扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辭過長或不清。換 言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑?！?BR> 5.不要使用縮寫 在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can’t， don’t，it’s， we’ll， they’ve等等) ，而應(yīng)當使用單詞完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)?！?BR> 6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復(fù) Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在該句的主要 主語和主要動詞前使用連詞?！?BR> 7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞，因為其實它應(yīng)是一個從句。這是桓齜淺? 常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。
8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也過于含糊，不適合用在正式的 場合。應(yīng)將get改為一個更加具體的單詞，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等?！?BR> 9.書寫難以辨認 信息不正確 I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there. 傳的信息不正確，或 者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確（如果確實是正確的，應(yīng)當解釋為什么這樣，因為讀者 不認為是正確的）。上述例句中，all的意思是；我們不能絕對地說每一件新 東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險起見，應(yīng)當使用many或most?！》怯⒄Z單詞 Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 盡管看起來象個單詞， 其實不是，至少不是個英文單詞。使用這個單詞的另一種形式?！?BR> 10.介詞多余 I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We
went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband. 在表 示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown，home，there， here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞?！?BR> 11.跑題或不相關(guān) There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 這個意思與文章的主題無關(guān)?！?BR> 12.陳詞濫調(diào) It is okay for children to fail sometimes. 所表 達的意思很普通 大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒有必要再說出來?！?BR> 13.標點問題 I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet. 這是一 個非常普遍的問題！許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號，尤其是當他們用手寫的時 候?！?BR> 14.重復(fù)冗余 Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個詞語不必要?！?BR> 15.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù) Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths. 單詞 需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞 單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單 獨使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞（a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）?！?BR> 16.拼寫錯誤 主語、動詞或賓語有問題 I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday. 句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題 缺少主語、動詞或賓 語，或者這些成分重復(fù)?！?BR> 17.語氣與文章不符 I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo,
and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out. 語氣與文章其他部分不相符 可能是過于正式或者太不正式。