成就(accomplishments/Achievements)：During my undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester, and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. Furthermore, most of my theses are awarded Essay of the Year. Last year I took the paper-based TOEFL and got an total score of 650.
中文：在我的本科學習期間，我的理論課成績在整個學院里始終都很突出。我每個學期都拿一等獎學金，還有我的GPA是89.5分，在113個同學中名列第一。此外，我的大多數論文都被評為年度佳論文。去年我參加了TOEFL的筆試，總分考了650。
經驗(experiences)：In addition, I worked part-time for IBM and Microsoft Corporation as a software testing researcher in the research department, where they offered me the opportunity to apply classroom theory to practice in the workplace and become familiar with their organization, work style and corporate culture.
中文：我在微軟和IBM的研究部門做過兼職軟件測試員。在那里它們給我提供了一個把課堂理論運用到工作實踐中的機會，并且也給我提供了一個熟悉它們的組織結構、工作風格和公司文化的機會。
興趣(academic interests and Other interests)：My academic interests and passions are in social policy and social justice, and I am thinking about social welfare research too. I would like to pursue these passions on a national level and eventually on an international level. And, I would like to start this pursuit while completing my Master and PhD. My hobbies are swimming, reading books, and cooking.
中文：我的學術興趣和熱情在社會政策和社會正義上，并且也一直在思考社會福利研究。我想在國內層面，終在國際層面追求這些酷愛。我想在開始這些求的同時完成我碩士和博士學位。我的業(yè)余愛好是游泳、讀書和烹調。
個性(character/personality)：I like long-range planning, working by myself, sometimes working on a team, and being the master of my own destiny.
中文：我喜歡做長期打算；獨立工作；有時也喜歡團隊工作；我喜歡自己掌握自己的命運。
未來目標(future goals)：Once I graduate from the University of Cambridge, I would like to become a loan officer for a little while. I am an entrepreneur at heart and would like to open up a business of my own. I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.
中文：等我在劍橋大學畢業(yè)了，我會先作一段時間信貸員。我內心很想成為一個企業(yè)家，從而開創(chuàng)自己的事業(yè)。我希望能進一步地學習，繼續(xù)我的研究工作，如果我能成為地獲得工程學獎學金的話。
強項或長處(strengths)：My strengths include creativity and ingenuity, excellent strategizing skills, self-control and self-regulation ability, love of learning, and open-mindedness. My level of knowledge or ability is adequate, but I wish to excel. For me, the five key strengths are ranked as follows: gratitude, optimism, zest, curiosity, ability to love and be loved.
中文：我的強項包括獨立創(chuàng)新能力、卓越的策劃能力、自我控制和自我調整能力、愛學習、思想開明。我的知識和能力是足夠的，但我喜歡超越。對于我，下邊列出了我的五個強項：感恩、樂觀、熱情、好奇心、愛與被愛的能力。
弱點(weaknesses/shortcomings)：As for my weaknesses, I feel that I am prone to take on a very heavy workload, and I stick to my guns about my own work, but I would like to take criticism carefully and a great deal of reflection.
中文：至于我的弱點，我覺得我傾向于承擔非常重的工作量，并且我對于我自己的工作固執(zhí)己見，但我愿意認真地接受別人的批評，并且做出大量的反思。
感謝語(acknowledgement)： I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your classes, and I think that your classes will leave a permanent imprint on my heart. Thank you so much for your willingness to share with us your wealth of knowledge. You are the inspiration for my career. Thanks a lot. Thank you for your kind assistance. I really appreciate that you took so much time to acquaint me with the company.
中文：我僅僅想讓你知道我是多么地喜歡你的課堂，我認為你的課堂將永遠留在我的心中。非常感謝你愿意同我們一起分享你的知識財富。你鼓舞著我的一生。非常感謝！謝謝你友好的幫助。
結束語(Ending)：I have asked Professors john McCarthy, Robert Gilpin and John Kingston to send you letters of recommendation. The attachment is in Acrobat PDF format, so if you have any problem in opening it, please let me know and I can send you a hard copy. Copies of my certificates and credentials will be sent to you under separate cover(ad.在另函中). Please look over the enclosed/attached resume, which provides more details about my background. I will arrange to come in for(v.接受) an interview at your convenience. I am more than willing to answer any of your questions concerning my application and research. Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. With best wishes for the festive season. I would be grateful if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you again for the opportunity to interview for the marketing position. I appreciated your hospitality and enjoyed meeting you and members of your staff. I look forward to hearing from you to arrange for an interview at your earliest convenience. I look forward, Mr. Weatherby, to hearing from you concerning your hiring decision. Again, thank you for your time and consideration.
中文：在我的本科學習期間，我的理論課成績在整個學院里始終都很突出。我每個學期都拿一等獎學金，還有我的GPA是89.5分，在113個同學中名列第一。此外，我的大多數論文都被評為年度佳論文。去年我參加了TOEFL的筆試，總分考了650。
經驗(experiences)：In addition, I worked part-time for IBM and Microsoft Corporation as a software testing researcher in the research department, where they offered me the opportunity to apply classroom theory to practice in the workplace and become familiar with their organization, work style and corporate culture.
中文：我在微軟和IBM的研究部門做過兼職軟件測試員。在那里它們給我提供了一個把課堂理論運用到工作實踐中的機會，并且也給我提供了一個熟悉它們的組織結構、工作風格和公司文化的機會。
興趣(academic interests and Other interests)：My academic interests and passions are in social policy and social justice, and I am thinking about social welfare research too. I would like to pursue these passions on a national level and eventually on an international level. And, I would like to start this pursuit while completing my Master and PhD. My hobbies are swimming, reading books, and cooking.
中文：我的學術興趣和熱情在社會政策和社會正義上，并且也一直在思考社會福利研究。我想在國內層面，終在國際層面追求這些酷愛。我想在開始這些求的同時完成我碩士和博士學位。我的業(yè)余愛好是游泳、讀書和烹調。
個性(character/personality)：I like long-range planning, working by myself, sometimes working on a team, and being the master of my own destiny.
中文：我喜歡做長期打算；獨立工作；有時也喜歡團隊工作；我喜歡自己掌握自己的命運。
未來目標(future goals)：Once I graduate from the University of Cambridge, I would like to become a loan officer for a little while. I am an entrepreneur at heart and would like to open up a business of my own. I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.
中文：等我在劍橋大學畢業(yè)了，我會先作一段時間信貸員。我內心很想成為一個企業(yè)家，從而開創(chuàng)自己的事業(yè)。我希望能進一步地學習，繼續(xù)我的研究工作，如果我能成為地獲得工程學獎學金的話。
強項或長處(strengths)：My strengths include creativity and ingenuity, excellent strategizing skills, self-control and self-regulation ability, love of learning, and open-mindedness. My level of knowledge or ability is adequate, but I wish to excel. For me, the five key strengths are ranked as follows: gratitude, optimism, zest, curiosity, ability to love and be loved.
中文：我的強項包括獨立創(chuàng)新能力、卓越的策劃能力、自我控制和自我調整能力、愛學習、思想開明。我的知識和能力是足夠的，但我喜歡超越。對于我，下邊列出了我的五個強項：感恩、樂觀、熱情、好奇心、愛與被愛的能力。
弱點(weaknesses/shortcomings)：As for my weaknesses, I feel that I am prone to take on a very heavy workload, and I stick to my guns about my own work, but I would like to take criticism carefully and a great deal of reflection.
中文：至于我的弱點，我覺得我傾向于承擔非常重的工作量，并且我對于我自己的工作固執(zhí)己見，但我愿意認真地接受別人的批評，并且做出大量的反思。
感謝語(acknowledgement)： I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your classes, and I think that your classes will leave a permanent imprint on my heart. Thank you so much for your willingness to share with us your wealth of knowledge. You are the inspiration for my career. Thanks a lot. Thank you for your kind assistance. I really appreciate that you took so much time to acquaint me with the company.
中文：我僅僅想讓你知道我是多么地喜歡你的課堂，我認為你的課堂將永遠留在我的心中。非常感謝你愿意同我們一起分享你的知識財富。你鼓舞著我的一生。非常感謝！謝謝你友好的幫助。
結束語(Ending)：I have asked Professors john McCarthy, Robert Gilpin and John Kingston to send you letters of recommendation. The attachment is in Acrobat PDF format, so if you have any problem in opening it, please let me know and I can send you a hard copy. Copies of my certificates and credentials will be sent to you under separate cover(ad.在另函中). Please look over the enclosed/attached resume, which provides more details about my background. I will arrange to come in for(v.接受) an interview at your convenience. I am more than willing to answer any of your questions concerning my application and research. Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. With best wishes for the festive season. I would be grateful if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you again for the opportunity to interview for the marketing position. I appreciated your hospitality and enjoyed meeting you and members of your staff. I look forward to hearing from you to arrange for an interview at your earliest convenience. I look forward, Mr. Weatherby, to hearing from you concerning your hiring decision. Again, thank you for your time and consideration.