GMAT真題:2010年8月作文(至8.26)(四)

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8.22 AI(四)
    11. rudder26 710; csdianna; 遺失的紫水晶 3次
    “Because of recent advancements in business and technology, the overall quality of life in most societies has never been better than at the present time.” (pool第112題)
    提綱:
    1物質(zhì)生活更豐富,生活更便利,不受天災(zāi)威脅
    2節(jié)奏太快,遠(yuǎn)離自然
    3進(jìn)步是雙刃劍要好好利用double-edged sword
    --from5月JJ
    12. hahaafeng; amanda621; sailing0831; serene301 4次
    “As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.” (pool第87題)
    提綱:
    1. The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
    2. The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
    3. Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.
    1. 個(gè)人確實(shí)應(yīng)該首先take the chief responsibility of their job obsolescence. 因?yàn)閷ψ约旱纳钬?fù)責(zé)的人,首先是自己。現(xiàn)在的社會也提供了機(jī)會:很多學(xué)校提供短期的培訓(xùn),人們可以參加保持自己keep up with the changes of the technologies and new direction of businesses。第二,只有個(gè)人采取主動(dòng),才能從根本上解決問題。否則merely rely on the help coming from government or business,人們會變得消極become passive and lose enterprise. 長期以來,對整個(gè)社會都有negative impact on the further development of one society.
    2. 但是,這不是說企業(yè)不應(yīng)該負(fù)責(zé)。after all, 是企業(yè)作出了創(chuàng)新和改變,并且造成了這些改變——并且造成了job obsolescence。應(yīng)該為這些負(fù)責(zé)任。比如,為員工提供opportunity of training for the new technique…,這樣也可以節(jié)約重新培訓(xùn)totally new employee的cost。
    3. Moreover, 政府也應(yīng)該采取一些行動(dòng)。政府作為一個(gè)社會的管理者supervisor,有責(zé)任保證全社會的well being. 應(yīng)該幫助個(gè)人完成適應(yīng)adjustment. 可以通過提供一些insurance for unemployment, advice for the occupational choice, necessary information of the new trend of business…
    Thesis sentence: While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so
    View1: l agree that individuals must assume primary responsibility for adjusting to job obsolescence, especially since our educational system has been preparing us for it
    View2: However, industry should bear some of the responsibility as well. It is industry, after all, that determines the particular directions technological progress and subsequent social change will take. Moreover in the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
    View3: Government should also assume some of the responsibility, since it is partly government money that fuels technological progress in industry. Moreover, government should help because it can help—for example, by ensuring that grants and federally insured student loans are available to those who must retool in order to find new work. Government can also help by observing and recording trends in worker displacement and in job opportunities, and by providing this information to individuals so that they can make prudent decisions about their own further education and job searches.
    --from 5月JJ