2015年GMAT句子改錯(cuò)模擬題及解析
41. In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.
(A) arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
(B) arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
(C) a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
(D) a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
(E) a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women
答案解析如下：
(A)arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 修飾成分：非謂語動(dòng)詞“arguing”在本選項(xiàng)中作狀語(動(dòng)詞的修飾語)，其邏輯主語為“Lucretia Mott”，與所修飾動(dòng)詞“published”的主語相同，這意味著“arguing”是動(dòng)詞“published”的伴隨狀語，根據(jù)與法要求，“doing”形式的伴隨狀語與所修飾動(dòng)詞同時(shí)發(fā)生且同(邏輯)主語，所以根據(jù)語法要求，“Lucretia Mott”一邊“發(fā)表論文”，一邊伴隨著在“爭論”，這種修飾關(guān)系并不合理。
(B)arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
【錯(cuò)誤】 修飾成分：見(A)。
(C)a treatise that advocates women's equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 平行結(jié)構(gòu)：劃線部分之后連接“and for……”結(jié)構(gòu)，僅能與(E)中的 “argued for”形成語法、語義均平行的“argued for……and for……”結(jié)構(gòu)。
(D)a treatise advocating women's equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 平行結(jié)構(gòu)：類似地，見(C)。
(E)a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women
【正確】 “that argued for……”是“a treatise”的定語從句，而“a treatise”是“Discourse on Women”的同位語，修飾關(guān)系明確。
【大意】 1850年Lucretia Mott發(fā)表了《女性的討論》，一篇為女性平等政治、法律權(quán)利和修改女性婚姻產(chǎn)權(quán)法而爭論的論文。
【解題思路推薦】
“Discourse on Women”意為“《女性的討論》”，這恰恰是一篇“treatise”(“論文”)，因此，(C)、(D)、(E)的修飾關(guān)系明顯優(yōu)于(A)和(B)而(E)和劃線句子之后的部分形成了“argued for……and for……”的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，因此選擇(E)。
41. In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.
(A) arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
(B) arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
(C) a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
(D) a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
(E) a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women
答案解析如下：
(A)arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 修飾成分：非謂語動(dòng)詞“arguing”在本選項(xiàng)中作狀語(動(dòng)詞的修飾語)，其邏輯主語為“Lucretia Mott”，與所修飾動(dòng)詞“published”的主語相同，這意味著“arguing”是動(dòng)詞“published”的伴隨狀語，根據(jù)與法要求，“doing”形式的伴隨狀語與所修飾動(dòng)詞同時(shí)發(fā)生且同(邏輯)主語，所以根據(jù)語法要求，“Lucretia Mott”一邊“發(fā)表論文”，一邊伴隨著在“爭論”，這種修飾關(guān)系并不合理。
(B)arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
【錯(cuò)誤】 修飾成分：見(A)。
(C)a treatise that advocates women's equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 平行結(jié)構(gòu)：劃線部分之后連接“and for……”結(jié)構(gòu)，僅能與(E)中的 “argued for”形成語法、語義均平行的“argued for……and for……”結(jié)構(gòu)。
(D)a treatise advocating women's equal political and legal rights
【錯(cuò)誤】 平行結(jié)構(gòu)：類似地，見(C)。
(E)a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women
【正確】 “that argued for……”是“a treatise”的定語從句，而“a treatise”是“Discourse on Women”的同位語，修飾關(guān)系明確。
【大意】 1850年Lucretia Mott發(fā)表了《女性的討論》，一篇為女性平等政治、法律權(quán)利和修改女性婚姻產(chǎn)權(quán)法而爭論的論文。
【解題思路推薦】
“Discourse on Women”意為“《女性的討論》”，這恰恰是一篇“treatise”(“論文”)，因此，(C)、(D)、(E)的修飾關(guān)系明顯優(yōu)于(A)和(B)而(E)和劃線句子之后的部分形成了“argued for……and for……”的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，因此選擇(E)。