綜合寫作
關(guān)于Ophir這個(gè)古老城市是否是位于南亞
| Topic 議題whether Ophir was an old kingdom located on South Asia |
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| Reading |
Listening |
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| Thesis 總論點(diǎn) |
The location was in South Asia |
Against |
Sub-point1 分論點(diǎn)1 |
The origin of products like rare woods found in Ophir was only in South Asia. |
Maybe Ophir was a trade center, and products from South Asia were transported to there, waiting to be sold. |
Sub-point2 分論點(diǎn)2 |
It took a year and half to travel from Ophir to the Mediterranean area by ship, which is the same as the time that it took from South Asia to Mediterranean area. |
The navigation and shipment technologies 3000 years ago were primitive and ships often got lost, which made the voyage at that time much longer than now. |
Sub-point 3 分論點(diǎn)3 |
There were similar words that were both used in Ophir and South Asia. |
The similarity of some words cannot prove the connection. For example, England and native Australia coincidently use the same word “dog”, but they did not have any connection at that time. |
Sample answer:
The reading and listeningboth talk about the location of Ophir. However, the professor contradicts theidea raised in the reading that kingdom Ophir was located in the South Asia.
Firstly, the reading saysthat the origin of products like rare woods found in Ophir was only in SouthAsia. Whereas, the professor argues that there were many trading centers at anancient time. Maybe Ophir was only one of them, and products from South Asiawere transported to there, waiting to be sold. The rare woods may come fromother places, in order to carry conveniences for merchants to bring them tosome other places.
Moreover, the reading claims thattime spent on shipping from Ophir to the Mediterranean area can prove itslocation on South Asia. On the contrary, the lecture opposes that navigationand shipment technology 3000 years ago were primitive, and ships often gotlost, which made the voyage at that time much longer than now. Therefore, it isnormally for a city nearby to get to the Arabian Peninsula for such a longtime.
Finally, the reading statesthat there were similar words that were both used in Ophir and South Asia.Contrarily, the listening argues that the similarity of some words cannot provethe connection. For example, England and native Australia coincidently use thesame word “dog”, but they did not have any connection at that time.
獨(dú)立寫作
| 作文題目： |
Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun? |
| 題型類別: |
利弊類 |
| 題材類別： |
二選一 |
| 相關(guān)舊題： |
類似2009.02.27 |
| 寫作思路： |
有挑戰(zhàn)性但假期少的工作，還是無趣但假期多的工作?這個(gè)題的難點(diǎn)是假定工資是一樣的，所以不能像以前的老題那樣，從高薪帶來好的生活質(zhì)量方面討論。 如果選擇有挑戰(zhàn)性但假期少的工作的文章就要去論證：a.有挑戰(zhàn)性比無的好, b.假期少也是有一定好處的 |
| 寫作指導(dǎo)： |
1、首先人們?cè)谕瓿勺约焊信d趣而又具挑戰(zhàn)性的工作時(shí)更有幸福感。一方面，當(dāng)一個(gè)人努力完成了一項(xiàng)挑戰(zhàn)性的有趣工作后，會(huì)有強(qiáng)烈的成就感，這會(huì)讓他感到快樂。另一方面，在他迎接挑戰(zhàn)的過程中他自己的不懈努力被他人目睹，他人的贊揚(yáng)和認(rèn)可會(huì)讓他充滿自豪感和喜悅。再者，能做自己感興趣的工作無疑比無聊的工作更讓人心情暢快。 2、其次，這樣的工作讓自己的能力得到磨煉和提升。無聊簡單的工作無法讓人吸收新鮮事務(wù)提高技能，而面對(duì)棘手但自己又感興趣的難題時(shí)，人會(huì)努力嘗試去攻克，這可以讓人學(xué)到新知識(shí)并同時(shí)收獲創(chuàng)造性想法。同時(shí)，不斷克服困難也是對(duì)自己意志的磨煉，更能經(jīng)受以后的考驗(yàn)。 3、最后，假期過多其實(shí)會(huì)讓人更無聊，甚至喪志。有人認(rèn)為假期少就等同于生活樂趣少，這是錯(cuò)誤的想法?！白臃囚~，焉知魚之樂”。工作著是美麗的，能在自己喜歡的崗位，本身就是一種樂趣享受。很多時(shí)候人不是怕忙，而是怕閑下來，工作通過有建設(shè)地利用了時(shí)間，使人心滿意足，再也沒有無聊之感。 |
| 詞匯拓展： |
self-approval n. 自我肯定;自我認(rèn)可 undertake v.從事，擔(dān)任 go through v. 經(jīng)歷 unremitting adj.不懈的; 始終不懈 perseverance n.不懈努力 self-promotion n.自我提升 temper one's will v. 磨煉人的意志 lose determination v.喪志 muddle along v. 得過且過 You are not a fish; how do you know what constitutes the enjoyment of fishes? 子非魚，安知魚之樂 |
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