作文訓(xùn)練---比較型作文之9

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作業(yè):(以下為一篇8分范文,請練習(xí)變換句型,按要求改寫成句型結(jié)構(gòu)漂亮的11分作文)
    It is often difficult for a student to decide whether he shall have roommates or not .In my oopinion, having roommates is always better.
    要求:在粗體句中體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系;且用讓步句型體現(xiàn)于室友同住的優(yōu)點多于缺點。
    Some students don't like having rommates. They think several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. We have the chance to learn to adjust the subtle relationships. Solving trivial problems will enrich our experience and help us understand others and learn to be considerate.
    要求:1、把藍色粗體中的2句改寫成用" those who"句型的復(fù)雜句;
    2、在紅色粗體句中體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,并用表示級意義的" No better chance could be found to do ..."句型改寫。
    The incomparable advantage is that living together offers an excellent chance of cooperation. Planning a party single-handedly may be a boring and difficult job. Our roommates'help makes it enjoyable and easy . Combining every member's wit and talent together, we may do anything perfectly.
    要求:1、在藍色粗體句中體現(xiàn)于第二段的遞進關(guān)系;
    2、在綠色粗體句中體現(xiàn)列舉關(guān)系;
    3、把紅色粗體句改寫成" Nothing could be ... without..."的雙重否定結(jié)構(gòu),并體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
    I regard rooming together as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of learning cooperation and understanding . And I confidently believe that such experience will be helpful in one's later life.
    要求:把藍色粗體句縮短成簡單句,以符合“復(fù)雜句+ 簡單句”的長短句交替出現(xiàn)的結(jié)構(gòu)。
    參考答案:
    I It is often difficult for a student to decide whether he shall have roommates or not .However,in my oopinion, the advantages of having roommates outweigh its disadvantages.
    Those who don't like having roommates argue that several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. On the contrary, no better chance could be found here to learn how to adjust the subtle relationships solving trivial problems will,in the long run, enrich our experience and help us understand others and learn to be considerate.
    Moreover, the incomparable advantage is that living together offers an excellent chance of cooperation. For example,Planning a party single-handedly may be a boring and difficult job. However, nothing could be so enjoyable and easy without our roommates’ help. Combining every member's wit and talent together, we may do anything perfectly.
    I regard rooming together as a precious opportunity for it is the best way of learning cooperation and understanding . Such experience will be helpful in one's later life.